For our WIP we produced a slideshow of brief points to cover (as seen below).
After presenting our work in progress to professionals, we were able to build from their feedback. A main critique we had been given was to focus on structure and to make sure we were clear with what our material was about. Being asked questions afterwards, such as, “Why should I care?” helped Mark and I realize that this feature needs to be something others can relate to. Education is a strong suit for our society to become future professionals and members of society – this topic can be important to a mass audience because every day we deal with people. Understanding how primary education is evolving every day and how teachers and schools are working on keeping their students healthy and happy can reflect upon our every day life and we tried our best to show the importance of this in our factual feature.